A wooden bench, old but still sturdy, on a hill.
A hill, with vast expanses of green, and a view.
A view of a lake, calm in the winter morning, a stray ripple disturbing its surface.
A ripple, fleeting yet sure, mirroring first light.
First light, peeking through the clouds, onto a dewdrop.
A dewdrop, glittering now, onĀ a blade of grass
A blade that shuddered in the slight breeze.
The breeze which whisked her hair from in front of her blue eyes
Blue eyes, deeper than the lake which she looked down upon,
As she sat on the wooden bench, old but still sturdy.
Alone.
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Very beautiful.
By surrendering your words into sentences, you have painted a picture of eternity.
By: Shubhda on November 21, 2010
at 7:55 pm
Thanks Shubhi
By: mythun on November 22, 2010
at 9:10 pm
liked the end . Intesified it all of a sudden .
By: bibhash on November 27, 2010
at 8:05 pm
ripple, fleeting yet sure…..
this is beautiful… one flows with each picture..
u r amazing
By: dateswidlyf on December 7, 2010
at 9:14 pm
Thanks
By: mythun on December 7, 2010
at 9:18 pm
As a rule, I refrain from appreciating anything you do
But this sure is beautiful
By: Kumar Ritwik on February 8, 2011
at 11:27 am